The paint sheen seems about right, not to shiny/ flash, and the whole bike looks "authoritative" like it's going to do battle. I would like to see what the original Indian military version looked like. Anyone have a photo? I think some thought could go into the side panniers to make them even more military than the ones on the older R Es. I have a vision in mind, just can't put it down in a post - if I see something that suits I'll bring it up.
You did great, however, in toning down the shine of the paint job - I like the duller finish a lot. In my opinion, the G-5 bikes have it over the C-5 in that they represent a true progression rather than a reversion. By using the Electra side cases to cover, I suppose, some of the EFI, they have avoided the pod like round cover on the C-5. It looks like what it is, a new bike design with a British heritage.